I have this yugioh deck built please rate it 1-10?

personally, i think you have WAY too many cards. I run a dragunity deck that i have modified very much towards my style, and if i were to be asked what my number one ultimate style and combo is, i would be able to say my style is to have my opponent underestimate me by just playing defensively and waiting to get dragon ravine and foolish burial. then i activate dragon ravine and use it to get dragunity legionairre in my hand. i use foolish burial to get dragunity aklys in the grave. i summon legionairre, activate his ability to equip him with aklys, use his second ability to destroy aklys and destroy a monster, which activates aklys's ability to destroy another card, which usually leaves my opponent wide open for attack. what you need to do is pick a style, THEN pick cards around that style.